Wednesday, October 18, 2017

Looking So Childish And Cute Comments

Rating: 5.0

Dear tender morning sun you are child,
Crawling in east sky's chest you smile,
Banana, coconut and papaya trees here,
They are watching and welcoming you.
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Kumarmani Mahakul
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Valsa George 22 October 2017

This is such a lovely write! The morning sun with its mild rays and beautiful face peering through the foliage of leaves is as cute as an innocent baby's radiant face! There is something so fresh about this poem! Top marks!

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Akhtar Jawad 21 October 2017

Personifying the morning sun as a cute child, a lovely idea, and when the idea is lovely and it's a poem by Mahakul Ji, the poem should be, and it is a lovely poem.

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Madathil Rajendran Nair 20 October 2017

You have presented beautifully how a sunrise inspires the world. Reminded me the famous hymn in Ramayana called Aditya Hridayam (Heart Of The Sun) . A simple poem generating divine thoughts in the reader's mind. (10)

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Rosalinda Flores Martinez 20 October 2017

The poem, full metaphors, evokes profound meaning. Thank you for sharing the inspiration.

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Susan Williams 19 October 2017

This poem has a very cute voice! ! ! The morning sun is very childlike, isn't it? The way it crawls lazily over the horizon, yawning hugely. Enjoyed the novel tone of this poem!

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Muzahidul Reza 19 October 2017

Dear tender morning sun you are child, Crawling in east sky's chest you smile, Banana, coconut and papaya trees here, They are watching and welcoming you. excellent imageries, thanks for sharing the poem with us

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Rini Shibu 19 October 2017

Soothing feel the nature gives, reflecting in the mood of the readers amazing

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Dr Dillip K Swain 18 October 2017

Entire sky has become pure rosy golden, Joy of eternal hope is revived in mind, You are very childish in behaviour, Trees want to fondle and dandle you. - A fantastic poem with scintillating description of cute and childish sky..! So powerful imagination.! A great piece of work..! !

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Kumarmani Mahakul

Kumarmani Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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