Looking Out Comments

Such a nice poem, Alafe. Read my poem, Love and L u s t. Thanks.

The juxtaposing of ideas is well done.beautiful poem

Poetic expression of inner feelings!

A great poem, really well put together. Great work.

Make your castle by the dream, paint the edges with reality you may feel it so real it seem Awake you in true but still in fantasy ..Nice work Alafe, but i prefer you do it line by line_Soul

gazing inward. thanks. I like it. I invite you to read my poems and comment.