Saturday, June 8, 2013

Looking Into Your Eyes Comments

Rating: 4.9

When I look into your eyes
Without a word and a sigh
I see a glimpse of wisdom and poise
The storm in the heart but no noise
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Chinedu Dike 09 November 2014

A Thing Of Beauty Is A Joy Forever - John Keats. A lovely romantic poem well articulated to capture the essence of the poem and conviction of the poet. A nice piece of poetry. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 22 June 2013

Beautiful poem wonderful write Rhyme and Rhythm Jasmine you lifted briskly at the start and made it flow like a brook and as u pin the note sweetly and gently

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Somaye Sadeghi 12 June 2013

i love it... it is so perefet

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David Wood 11 June 2013

I love this poem, it is so gentle and inspirational.

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Valerie Dohren 09 June 2013

Beautiful poem with many inspired lines - a joy to read.

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Farah Ilyas 09 June 2013

Captured the readers heart & soul in one glance, truly enjoyable poem

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Ramesh Rai 08 June 2013

amazing write good flow with full of emotion

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Sallam Yassin 08 June 2013

pure heart can only paint this beauty in one glance..... so sweet

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Wahab Abdul 08 June 2013

up to 11th line it flows exquisitely like some great poets..it is too sweet and full of beauty.. enjoyed it fully...the eyes of.......anybody or anything....8

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Somanathan Iyer 08 June 2013

words flowing like stream. great! The unknown will be greatly inspired by your comforting words.

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Captain Cur 08 June 2013

A spiritual write, very effective choice of words. Strength yet calm permeating throughout.

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Siyabonga A Nxumalo 08 June 2013

Great poem jasmeen, the wording is amazing. Siya_! !

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Anil Kumar Panda 08 June 2013

very nice. beautiful rhyme and wordplay.liked it.

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