Monday, May 23, 2016
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'Round and 'round she twirls,
a breeze dancing with her curls,
while soft laughter swirls.
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Trinity Baldwin
21 July 2018
You have great imagination. I felt the twirls and swirls of this fantastic dance.
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Ratnakar Mandlik
23 May 2016
A beautifully conceived song rich in rhyme and rhythm though displaying longings for unfulfilled aspirations /desires. Thanks for sharing.10 points.
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7/30/2025 10:53:53 AM # 1.0.0
Well written Alesia with beauty and feelings :)