Monday, February 9, 2009

Looking From The Inside Out Comments

Rating: 4.1

Looking from the inside out
Wondering what my life is all about
Trapped in this body is a mind
Going crazy most of the time
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Rhonda Moody
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Ted M 19 August 2009

A great sincere desire to get out of those feelings. The feelings flow so well throughout the write and in lovely rhyme making it a great poem. There's so much melody in this, not just ending rhymes......10+++

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Lycko Chizo 25 July 2009

I can totally relate to this poem. You know depression, which I am a slave most of a time. But I am amazed that although shadows of sadness seems to completely covering me. I'm still alive and continue going on no matter what! Thanks for the poem.10+ Feelings well express in clear and creative way. Praise to the poet!

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Janice M Pickett 28 March 2009

Your feelings and your pain relate to each other. Stress and emotional upset. You have a broken heart right now but if you can change the way you think. Like before you go to bed say 'thank you god for the great day I am going to have tomorrow' Thank him before the even instead of asking. It WORKS. Be determined to feel happy. Sing laugh do whatever it takes to make yourself smile. The healing will begin that way. Soon you will be back in control. I know...Believe me. Hug.

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Idy H 09 February 2009

I know what you're talking about in this poem; depression is just......sucky; find something you can still enjoy and fill your time with it and hopefully, time will heal.

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