Monday, October 31, 2016

Looking For Fresh Water Comments

Rating: 5.0

Unable to live
in the polluted water of the pond
the fish jumped up on the bank.
Yet unable to go anywhere
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Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh
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Dr Dillip K Swain 08 February 2022

Jumping up and down again and again... delightful expression..liked it

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Kumarmani Mahakul 26 November 2018

It is a beautiful poem on environment having touching expression through pond., fresh water and a fish. Thanks for sharing.10

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Christopher Tye 09 November 2016

Really deep poem, it works really well on so many levels. Us humans have a lot to answer for with our environmental impact.

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Zwelethu Siwaphiwe Shweni 07 November 2016

Wowww fish is in trouble here. Pond would be better than a tank. Thank you for sharing.

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Edward Kofi Louis 31 October 2016

Fish and fresh water! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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