Sunday, March 8, 2009

Looking For Change Comments

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One day I looked into myself and didn't like the look
So determined to change I sought for a way by seeking it in a book
I read and pondered, researched and thought, a wistful point of view
What can I do that others will see and know that I am new?
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Marama Kelly
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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 15 March 2009

A great determination and self exploration. Keep it up, Marama. Best Wishes Naseer

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PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE 09 March 2009

the melody of your poem talks about the unconditional love of the creator, beautiful, thanks for sharing

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