Looking Down From My Balcony Comments

Very romantic. Got me straight to the heart. Reshma. Keep writing more like this.

wow, romantic staff, i really like the code of your poem...it goes deep in the heart...and hey be careful, i might just fall for your poem..hahahah! ! ! ! ! ! ! just joking....but great poem straight 10 from me

So romantic..I could imagine such loving look from that prince's eyes!

Classic and romantic. Very nice work.

very nice imaginary, romantice and so sweet.... Like it very much.

how romantically you weave a scene.....very moving.

As enchanting as a fairy tale. May you both live happily ever after. Lovely work. Warm regards, Sandra

wow, very nice and decsriptive poem. i actually felt i was there watching it with you. well done.

The scene you depict in such lush detail might have come from a Bollywood movie. You take the reader to a far-away land where the air is filled with the scent of sandalwood and the eye, dazzled by a confusion of sumptuous colour. A romantic poem from a romantic heart. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

grirrl thi is romeo and juliet. very nice thanks. md

Good One.. a true dipiction of a gal dream. Keep it up.

Of the passions did I speak From books old or music In syntheses Moses and Christ and the others My masters in the tavern With “Paris” did I cross The sword as in Romeo and Juliet Shakespeare might have read Or heard the story from the city of love Standing are you on the balcony in Verona “The mole on the cheek of my love” So went I in passions when I asked The friends to hear me in the city dear Known am I in the world of love My self you have become as for me My identity are you for my love Like my address on the wall of my home In the tavern when I sip the cup I see the reflection of the eyes drunk In passion I see for reason is not mine When your sweet words descend on me From up above the balcony in my search You told not to speak of the philosophies Of love and be the initiate When my cheek speaketh the love you seek Lost are why you in the world Did not I tell you are drunk with the wine Nature is me and the universe I hold Of earth and mars and canyons great You speaketh for me they quote to listen The seduction of my eyes they shall never forget My head in your lap but they look at my eyes Like an unsheathed sword am I Tread softly for the path is dear

so amazing, , , , , , , , love brings you to a world of your own, , , , i am learning passion from you reshma, , ,10 and much more

A vivid imagery evoking experience, bringing readers close to the heart of the poet

This is a vivid free verse poem, Reshma, filled with superb imagery in nearly every line. It tells a beautiful story very well and your descriptive phrasing is outstanding. Carl.

Thank you. A visual scene from my younger days when I daydreamed of (to me) alien and exotic cultures.

Nice poem. I could visualise the thoughts expressed. Sweet and simple. Thank you.

a lovely scene...enchanting.... Ency Bearis

Feeling this poem like Romeo and Juliet, such a romatic scene. a 10.