Wednesday, August 5, 2009

Looking Back Comments

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Looking back at those
memories, as i take
a train back to the
past, faces, places, and situations
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nithya raghavan
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Kerry O'Connor 06 August 2009

Another beautiful piece of writing. Your extended metaphor captures the emotions superbly. I like the momentum you have achieved in the rhythm of the poem. Wonderful.

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