Tuesday, March 25, 2008

Looking Across The Hall Comments

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Looking across the hall, there is a child weeping into the air.
You see, little Melanie has no hope, and no one there to care.
This child’s pain pours deep into the soil.
Her life is gone because daddy left to study Hoyle.
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Duncan Wyllie 01 April 2008

Amazingly compassionate heartfelt write Daniel, your wisdom pours through your lines I shall give this a ten without question Top draw poetry Love duncan X

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