Looking Comments

You introduced the thought superbly of hope and redemption. Good write.

The trick is... to look inside oneself, I believe. A wonderful poem, good work.

A deep, almost etherall look, where we all surely must look-very emotive. A spiritful write, with conviction

the fact that you keep looking is the best prayer of all!

This poem floats my boat. I love it great work Smoky, we look for God costantly notfeeling the worth in ourselves. Great write.