Look Within Comments

I have wondered this myself. Many people don't see what's on the inside, they only judge people by what they look like and what they do. They usually don't try to find out what's on the inside of a person's heart. Don't stop writing. Your poems are really good.

the poem depicts the truth about what we perceive in everyday life and what people really are, great work!

I was recently called a f.ing racist by a 14-year-old girl, which was set up, I think by my criticism of her too-rosey take on life. Evidently she has experienced nothing but treasures. I called her a 'brat', admittedly, then promptly banned her. You, on the other hand, have the polar opposite take, and I could identify with this poem at a gut level. It is quite good.

i can see that you have good soul in your poetry.............you have written spectacular poem...............

spectacular! ! halfway through I felt like I'm reading a novel. you highlighted great aspects of how we see people these days. amazingly done!

I don't know what i say.. but i guess the 2 comments before me say what i will keep on writing the truth :)

This is a great work.... I feel the same way, five stars, touching