Wednesday, September 5, 2007

Look What You'Ve Done Comments

Rating: 4.3

Look at me here
Lying on the floor
I'm forever changed
Look what you've done
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Khairul Ahsan 27 May 2015

I have just read this beautiful poem of yours. The poem starts with a feeling of devastation and ends with a feeling of resurrection. So nice!

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Greenwolfe 1962 28 May 2008

I really liked this because you transformed a singular emotion into a transforming experience. That is the residue of cruelty. A magnificent statement done in repetition. wonderful poetic device. I much approve. GW62

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Red Blooded Black Hearted 12 September 2007

Strength, something that poem had a lot of. Great work Amie.

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Carmela May 09 September 2007

Amy this poem is GREAT. I know that me and my friends don't really talk to you at school much but right now I feel your Pain. So yer Me and Emma like your poems keep at it.

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