Monday, March 19, 2007

Look What I Found Comments

Rating: 4.1

Look what I've found mum!
Look what it is!
Do you think I can keep it mum?
Or should I let it roam free
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Alison Smith
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David Harris 20 March 2007

Alison, I hope you kept him despite what your mother might have said. I just loved this piece. The rhythm and rhyme just flowed through it beautifully. You get a big 10 from me, my friend. It is just lovely. Something nice to start my morning off. Thanks for sharing it. David

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Declan McHenry 20 March 2007

A neat write Alison. Love the twist.

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And yet a different twist in style...and yet i like it once again...fine write my dear... f.j.r.

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Alison Smith

Alison Smith

Orange, New South Wales, Australia
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