Thursday, April 19, 2007

Look Towards The Sun Comments

Rating: 5.0

-Prologue-

The reality melts away,
like rotting metal turned to rust.
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Cecelia Warner 29 April 2007

Awesome talent buddy! Loved how well everything blended together...BEAUTIFUL job Ally! Your friend, Cecelia

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Shelley L Baxter-stanley 20 April 2007

I like your thought process in this poem! Once again a very well written and interesting piece...also it was kool how you named each verse. Great Moral and advise to follow. Keep sharing from your heart.You have talent. =Shelley=

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