Thursday, April 24, 2008

Look To The Sky Comments

Rating: 4.3

Thru the sky I see
Thru the wind I feel
Thru our love I lived......
In these last days I know Life will go on.
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Whisper Dawn
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Greenwolfe 1962 24 June 2008

The internal rhyme at the end is special and I gave it a 9 for that reason. Well worth reading. GW62

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~ Jon London ~ 24 April 2008

Fantastic poem very well written and delivered. A fine piece all the very best J.L

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