Thursday, October 6, 2011

Look To The Sky Comments

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Look to the sky
When you become half what you used to be
When the pride that fuelled your strut
Becomes the meekness that turns your gold to rust
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Vuyani Brown Mnisi
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Brett Bordyn 01 April 2021

Great poem. Why did you stop posting? I hope all is well with you and hope to see more current work. Someone with your gift should be sharing their art.

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Pheko Motaung 20 January 2012

Great poem.Great write.Ngiyabonga mfowethu

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Siyabonga A Nxumalo 19 January 2012

imnandi mfo wam, qhubeka ubhale thina sizofunda...great poem.

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Wow! Homeboy, Intle kakhulu lento ndiyibona, keep moving brother, i like your poem, looking forward to reading more of your work.

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Vipins Puthooran 07 October 2011

And if our look for the eternal Father who lives in sky will change the colour of our eyes...nice poem...well written

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