Tuesday, November 10, 2009

Look To The Sky Comments

Rating: 5.0

July the Fourth, the day of independence and a dream come true
Surrounded by people having fun, I terribly missed you
I saw in the sky just how it is that you make me feel
Meeting you and seeing you has begun my heart to heal
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Deborah Cromer
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Kranthi Pothineni 10 November 2009

Very well written. Touching and moving piece. Last line is amazing.

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Deborah Cromer

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Portland, Oregon
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