Look, the sun is rising
Yesterday's troubles have dissolved
In the morning mist; the past will go away
At last: don't fret and weep
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we have a tradition in i ndia to worship the rising Sun. watching the Sun come up is a spiritual experince. it fills you with hope and revival. hope and acceptance - you have captued the mood well. 15 May08
...will transform worry into calm acceptance...and that too without any hurry! the poem hails the sun rise...hails both optimism and patience...
A beautiful, optimistic poem that contasts so well the sunrise of hope and acceptance with the sunset of finality. I enjoyed this. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥
A beautifully penned poem from the heart and very much apreciated 10 x Chris
Very eloquent. The last stanza can be written at sunrise as well as sunset. Lovely, Rani. Always your friend, Sandra
wow! great poem. makes too much sense; every line is deep. good work! ! : ]
You capture the moment very well. With each rising sun comes a chance for us all to change. Thank you for sharing.