Friday, October 7, 2011

Look Of Eternity Comments

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Am I a fool, to fool myself?
I once suspected that you love,
If only through your unmoved eye,
And your look of eternity.
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Stefanie Fontker
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Dave Walker 08 October 2011

Great poem and great lines. We all fool our selves at least once in our life. Good write.

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Allemagne Roßmann 08 October 2011

No one looks like eternity...but the feelings can add to the fragments of life transcending to..nice write..

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Jacqui Broad 08 October 2011

Good question I want to remember. To say so much, with so little words... Nice... :)

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Tsira Gogeshvili 08 October 2011

Hi Stefanie, - Beautiful tiny rhyme It is good to ask herself a question... But some speaks too the love still is blind... Best wishes, Tsira

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