Wednesday, November 11, 2020

Look Me Straight In The Eye Comments

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Look me straight in the eye
Not askance or a side glance
Or shifty-eyed like you know
You are busted telling me a lie.
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L MILTON HANKINS
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Dr Antony Theodore 26 November 2020

Do not betray my sincerest trust By keeping secrets from me Telling me what I know is untrue Straight in the eye, you simply must. sincerety, truth. look straight into my eyes. noble ideas.. tony

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 24 November 2020

Your wonderful poem highlights the importance of being refreshingly honest, and why it's so essential. Thanks for sharing.

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L Milton Hankins 21 November 2020

Thank you so much, Deluke, for your kind remarks.

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L Milton Hankins 17 November 2020

Thanks, Robert. I like to think that sometimes I hit the nail on the head and say it with a directness that might be unsettling. I appreciated your commend.

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Deluke Muwanigwa 11 November 2020

Great one. Am sure whomsoever got the message. Its a universal message beautifully woven in rhyme. Thanks for sharing and caring.

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