Monday, July 23, 2012

Look Into Yourself Comments

Rating: 2.5

Look at the sky when it's drifting into the mist of the dawn;
Smile at the tidy green grass lying on the arms of the lawn;
Feel the fresh air and you'll hear the cry of a baby newly-born;
Wait a bit, here comes the optimistic morn!
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Abhinaba Majumdar
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Abhinaba Majumdar 24 July 2012

thanks a lot Yoonoos sir; hope to get your feedback on my other poems. Others who are/ will be reading my poems, please don't dither to share your opinions. I'll be grateful.

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