Friday, February 10, 2012

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people look into there broken heart,
wishing,
wanting,
a brand new start,
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loves crushed
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Sylvia Lukeman 10 February 2012

A beautiful poem.I get the feeling tnat you enjoy writing poetry .............................................................................................................. The spelling of the word there means over there You need the possessive word their. (I hope that you do not mind me writing this

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