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Look How Far I Have Come! Comments

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05.03.2017


LOOK HOW FAR I HAVE COME! :
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milka mukiri
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George Krokos 16 August 2017

It's good to feel and be able to say what you have written in your poem. However, you may need to correct the seventh line as indicated in my personal message to you.

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