Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Thursday, December 29, 2011

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I feel same sun shine everyday
As usual appearance of bright rays
Normal movement on the road with fresh start
To enjoy the life and know it as real art
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
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Rajendran Muthiah 04 January 2012

Wonderful, optimistic ideas are given. These ideas can be still beautifully expressed in freeverse form. To make the line endings rhyme, generally the poets struggle to express their thoughts with clarity. Unusual word orders may be avoided(single miss fail in stanza 2) . Though the lines sound a little prosaic, the thoughts create pictures and make the lines poetic. Cheers to the poet from a remote place in Gujarat.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 04 January 2012

JRNightingale 2011.12.30 18: 27 A lovely honest message. Happy New Year Jadia. Reply

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 01 January 2012

Dorothy A. Holmes apwlts2 Words of wisdom said with grace and conviction...Happy New Year To you also! Dorothy A Poet Who Loves To Sing Yesterday at 9: 34am · Like Aslan Moonbeam nice write about an hour ago · Like 3 minutes ago · Like

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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