I feel same sun shine everyday
As usual appearance of bright rays
Normal movement on the road with fresh start
To enjoy the life and know it as real art
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JRNightingale 2011.12.30 18: 27 A lovely honest message. Happy New Year Jadia. Reply
Dorothy A. Holmes apwlts2 Words of wisdom said with grace and conviction...Happy New Year To you also! Dorothy A Poet Who Loves To Sing Yesterday at 9: 34am · Like Aslan Moonbeam nice write about an hour ago · Like 3 minutes ago · Like
Wonderful, optimistic ideas are given. These ideas can be still beautifully expressed in freeverse form. To make the line endings rhyme, generally the poets struggle to express their thoughts with clarity. Unusual word orders may be avoided(single miss fail in stanza 2) . Though the lines sound a little prosaic, the thoughts create pictures and make the lines poetic. Cheers to the poet from a remote place in Gujarat.