Saturday, October 13, 2012

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Rating: ★4.8

Resembles
Beautiful Ocean
But inside sharks are
Hungry to ruin.
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Young Church Poetry
Ashes
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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 09 April 2013

i applaud your skill of perception. a deep poem

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 19 October 2012

Except for the last two lines, this poem is very realistic and full of intelligence!

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Hazel Durham 13 October 2012

A original poem everything has its good and bad points. Great write!

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Lyn Paul 13 October 2012

Yes tread lightly. Beautifully written Young Church

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Persian Khushi 13 October 2012

awesome writing! en joyed reading.

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