Sunday, November 8, 2009

Look Before You Fall Comments

Rating: 5.0

I never looked and got trapped in-between.
Someone should pull me back to the other side.
Wonder who it will turn out to be.
Will it be the right one?
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Nicole Gehrman
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I know a girl who should really read this poem cuz she thinks it's really bad to like two people at the same time and she feels bad. I think this would help her realize that she's not bad and she's not the only one. Btw, very expressive. I like it.

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Slade Oriley 14 November 2009

This is a truly great poem. It's hard to find love expecially in the world we live in today. You don't know what is real and what is a counterfeit. It's never easy having to choose between two people. Either way somebody is getting hurt. That was the best choice you made. There's been many times I've had to leave. I will leave if they fight over me or if it's gonna shread a friendship. In the end it's never really worth sacrificing a friendship over a temporary feeling. When your young you tend to be in 'love' everytime the wind blows. Just be careful and ask yourself if this person going to help me to reach my dreams or hinder me. Great job. Keep writing

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Mgt Man 13 November 2009

I can totallly relate to this poem you are a great poet!

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Nicole Gehrman

Nicole Gehrman

Colfax, Wisconsin
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