Saturday, November 22, 2008

Look Away... Comments

Rating: 3.7

If you search
The eyes of this divine existance
you will see warriors in battle
giving their blood
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Aiman Rathore
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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 25 November 2008

A thoughtful poem, which takes a sudden plunge from first stanza to second stanza and then turn back in last stanza thus completing its circle.The theme has been poetized vividly without any grace note.With love and affection I give you 10/10....Your Uncle, Naseer.

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Faizan Tahir 22 November 2008

superb! ! ........Marvelous! ! i dont have words to describe your excelence of writing......

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Min Sia 22 November 2008

Revealing..honestly I had goosebumps after reading this poem... It's really great..both the words and its meaning...

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Aiman Rathore

Aiman Rathore

Lahore, Pakistan
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