Don't need a mirror
In a tired, desperate clutter
Tightest of windowless submarine spaces
Realized
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I would like to read the completed version when it is done, it almost sounds like this is about Pearl harbour. Well done so far!
No mirror is necessary, if in pure heart and transparent. thanks. I like it. I invite you to read my poems and comment.
Great poem about introspection. Good insight.