Tuesday, May 7, 2013

Look At Yourself (Incomplete) Comments

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Don't need a mirror
In a tired, desperate clutter
Tightest of windowless submarine spaces
Realized
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A.Z. McCoy
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Howard Savage 12 January 2016

Great poem about introspection. Good insight.

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Howard Savage 10 January 2016

Great poem on taking a retrospective look at oneself.

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Eldin Van Der Walt 27 January 2014

I would like to read the completed version when it is done, it almost sounds like this is about Pearl harbour. Well done so far!

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Gajanan Mishra 07 May 2013

No mirror is necessary, if in pure heart and transparent. thanks. I like it. I invite you to read my poems and comment.

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