Tuesday, March 17, 2020

Look At The Moon Comments

Rating: 5.0

Look at the moon
It's full and complete
Like my love
Silver, white, shining
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Nosheen Irfan
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Kumarmani Mahakul 19 March 2020

A brilliant expression has been made having an entwining of love and moon. I appreciate the way of presentation. Marvelous work. Thank you dear madam for sharing this gem with us.

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Rajnish Manga 17 March 2020

Maybe you think / Love has phases just like / The moon But it breathes and shines / Somewhere / Beyond the sight.... //.... Seen or unseen, love is not love which alters when it alteration finds. So, it has nothing to do with the changing phases of moon. Thanks for sharing.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 17 March 2020

A magnificent poem! Love may hide sometimes or it may grow silent...I appreciate your inner feelings....endearingly expressed! Top score!

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