Look At The Eyes Of Clouds Comments

i don't know if i have ever written or spoken of multiple leaves as leafs, but i see (below at the end of the copied definition) that leafs IS an alternate spelling for the plural form for leaf. from a google site: 1 leaf noun, often attributive \'lef : one of the flat and typically green parts of a plant that grow from a stem or twig : a sheet of paper in a book : a part that can be added to or removed from a table to change the size of its top surface plural leaves also leafs - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - Have you ever looked at the tears of the sky? have you ever noticed how we hear these lies? .............i don't understand what you refer to with these lies. - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - but when i saw the eyes of clouds in the fall, i believed that i can climb the sky's wall .............fall/wall is a good rhyme, but i don't get the idea of climbing the sky's wall. what does that have to do with seeing the eyes of clouds. - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - I DO like these last two lines: and they sell their loyalty and choose the ground, while the clouds always stay in the sky's bound .................does bound refer to boundary? maybe i would write while the clouds always stay in the skies, bound ...........this does have a different meaning, but i like it better. the clouds are bound up/tied up in the skies. - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - those eyes were full of hope, i changed a little and modestly bowed ..............i wonder what the significance of these two lines is. - - - - - - - - - - - i noticed that the leafs are so weak, because they leave the trees and fall down so sick.............i don't know if a botanist would say this, but it is an interesting way of thinking about the falling leaves. - - - - - - - - - - - - thanks for sharing. bri ;) good of you to write in english, as i do not read italian.

Agreed with others, this work was done with beautiful lines...Good to read it_Soul

Wow a superb poem! Yeah God holds them up. But leaves may fall. Pls do review my latest poem too.

Has potential.....nicely written and can be taken in a few different way...which are all pretty good.

very nicely written man i love it