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Marvelous poem. A ten from me.

Your advise on the poem Money, Money Money was spot on. I do hope that he take the advise to read more of Langston Hughes, his poetry will be the richer for it. Money as a means to an end is indispensable, , 'tis the attitude toward it that taints it. respect arises only from within. Read mine - My Heart Is Native - Adeline |

Superb, my brother Little Eagle. Keep writing!