Sunday, December 10, 2006

Look At That Guy Comments

Rating: 4.8

Just look at that guy, He seem so happy

Look at that guy, He seem so free
Look at that guy, Just looking at me
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Tears From A Soldiers Eyes
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DaLovely One 11 April 2007

Ah Clever....I like this poem.

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Kelly Hanson 22 December 2006

think you're pretty wonderful, ey? well, you should.... keep up the good work daniel. youve got great instincts.

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Sebastian Sandok 10 December 2006

Awh ha a truly envious piece you have written here, Perhaps stanza spacing would give such a poem an aesthetic spark. Well done though, Humorous.

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