Friday, March 24, 2006

Look At Me Boys Comments

Rating: 5.0

Look at me boys
Watch me twirl my hair
Look at me
Look at me boys
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Shane Clawson 24 October 2007

This poem would make a great song! ! ! ! Keep writng!

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Lawrence S. Pertillar 24 March 2006

I happen to like this! I can see you with a conga, a bass player and a sax backing you doing this at a reading! This is some 'hot' stuff! AND please don't associate my age with/without knowing what's happenin'! You get some killuh beatz behind this and this is sure nuff smokin' stuff here! Congratulations! L

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