Thursday, November 29, 2007

Look At Me Comments

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Look at me
Look in my eyes
can you see
my pain
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Tyease Collins 23 June 2008

I look at you and my tears fall, the hate that you bring, makes life seem less strong, hold me through the night, while i protect you from the worst, as of death we embrace with glory gore we end we must. hehe sucks i know. I love this poem though. Nice XoXoXoXo

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Arabian Heart 12 June 2008

eyes that i see that make my heart fail such pain that only make my breath die could this really be true continue to make poems that are true to you

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Lara Hyland 31 March 2008

i get it because my friends cant look at me any more, they find it easier to look passed me and forget me

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i can't see what you are going through but i can see it is maing yu really depressed....

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Evaughn Gray 29 November 2007

i like it..simple..~hazel

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