Saturday, November 12, 2016

Look At And Listen To Comments

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Dear children look at,
An elephant is coming
Listen to his trumpet.
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Kumarmani Mahakul
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Pushpendra Patel 27 February 2019

We should listen to God. Leaf carries letter. Calmness is inside own mind. This we should feel. Soul is pure. Nature impacts on soul. This is a great poem and you are a nice poet.

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Dr Antony Theodore 07 August 2018

Dear children! listen to me, Be open hearted be a sea. Do noble deeds pray God, Effloresce well from a bud. What a noble advise my dear poet Kumaramani... you have a heart of gold. tony

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Edward Kofi Louis 13 November 2016

Nursery rhyme! ! With the muse of the animals. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Bill Cantrell 12 November 2016

I totally agree with Gary, I feel some of the best poetry ever written are the nursery rhymes, they have an enchantment about them and yours is right up there with the best.

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Kumarmani Mahakul

Kumarmani Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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