Thursday, December 10, 2009

Look And See What I Can See Comments

Rating: 4.8

Look at there and see how dark this world is!
Obviously, there’s an absence of real peace.
Anytime, war may attack brutally
If rulers will do things carelessly.
...
Read full text

Obed dela Cruz
COMMENTS
Ency Bearis 10 December 2009

A bright fruitful hope written and presented well...an encouraging thoughts...great...10

0 0 Reply
Ramesh T A 10 December 2009

Optimistic note expressed in this poem is quite welcome1

0 0 Reply
Obed dela Cruz

Obed dela Cruz

Marikina City
Close
Error Success