Sunday, January 4, 2015

Lonliness Comments

Rating: 5.0

All alone the weary heart weeps in the corner of the courtyard
Misses the mesmerizing moments which have left now the tears of torment
The love was a lie or perhaps a never realized mystery
The days of happiness and hues have become the rotten pages of history
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M Asim Nehal 30 January 2016

It is a sign of great poetess in you that makes you to write first before retiring to the bed.....No insomnia just Poeteria.10+++++

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Nishi Kumari 12 June 2016

Thanks for your views and appreciation

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Anil Kumar Panda 10 June 2015

This is beautiful poem.Flow and rhyming is so good.Keep inking.

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Nishi Kumari 20 November 2015

thank you for your words :)

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Sekharan Pookkat 10 January 2015

music continues till rhythm brakes rainbow disappears and darkness covers into loneliness heart weeps for consolation good penning- read and comment on my poem in the same title

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Nishi Kumari 20 November 2015

thank you for your views :)

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