Tuesday, October 27, 2009

Lonliness! Comments

Rating: 5.0

My ears I strained, did I hear a knock?
Oh! There it was again, did I hear someone call?
My ears peered, did I see someone come?
I turned the door knob,
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Carol Gall 09 November 2009

good idea on lonliness 10

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Indira Babbellapati 06 November 2009

thisreads like a dramatic monologue...very good to read!

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Kranthi Pothineni 02 November 2009

Wind, stars, moon, imaginations and your poetic heart will never make you feel alone. Nice write.

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Ravi Sathasivam 01 November 2009

Beautiful poem Well penned Enjoyed reading it 10+

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Siddartha Montik 30 October 2009

nice wordings.. in such lonliness! 10++

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