Tuesday, August 11, 2020

Longings Comments

Rating: 5.0

Longings turn obstinate this night
and like stars refuse to sleep
in their desire to stay bright,
when eyes start aching
...
Read full text

Saroj Padhi
COMMENTS
Kumarmani Mahakul 11 August 2020

Stars refuse to sleep as they want to dazzle more in life with greater brightness. Moon gazes with revival of new love and calmness. With respect to natural perception, This poem is excellently penned...10

0 0 Reply
Sachidananda Panda 11 August 2020

" ...desires erupt like fishes of silver jumping over a narrow stream spreading sparks of fire into dull body of a moon's beam..." Marvelous Indeed... loved it... Thanks

0 0 Reply
Saroj Padhi

Saroj Padhi

ODISHA
Close
Error Success