Longing Comments

It stands out in its brevity and use of repetition, creating a sense of urgency and an intense longing that pervades the poem

TWO: It stands out in its brevity and use of repetition, creating a sense of urgency and an intense longing that pervades the poem 5 Stars Full

ONE: 'Longing' expresses a longing for solace from unrequited love, akin to other works by the author exploring themes of isolation and yearning..

Feelings of the heart crafted into words. Beautiful

sounds like a love one that died, and only way to experience him.her is in one's dreams

The kind of longing poetry

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thumb's up. this is good work

Seems like a beautiful take on unrequited love, trading the love sick days longing torment, for dreams of nightly longed for affection which by day again turn sour, the hopeless longing of the day, is day night cyclic chased away.

Lovely and very romantic. A beautiful poem indeed.

Nice piece, love is such an illogical subject, well expressed.

Waiting for a lost love.