(longing) This Last Hour Of Waiting Comments

This is a well crafted piece, 'I give you one last chance For one small dance, And I really do implore, I've waited too long an hour This is so pulling for the heart, great writing here Love duncan X

Really nice read and write K. Jared. lovely flow and a great variety of words which give such interest to the poem. Good relaxed atmosphere too, casual sort of. Lovely. Love Ernestine XXX