Wednesday, August 30, 2017

Longing For You Comments

Rating: 4.5

Needing your soft touch, longing for it now
That embracing grasp that you possess
That can hold me so tightly, leaving me destressed
Of all the pain I hold inside
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Ladicius Angel
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Jazib Kamalvi 31 August 2017

A great start with a nice poem, Angel. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks

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Chinedu Dike 31 August 2017

Vivid elucidation of the power of love, lovely and very passionate. Thanks for sharing Ladicius Angel.

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Rajnish Manga 31 August 2017

Great portrayal of the lovers' interaction and passion for each other. It means a lot. Thanks. Those eyes that remind me of the moon So mysterious and unreadable So peaceful and comforting you make me undescribably ecstatic

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