Longing For Long Unseen Peace Comments

Day near green tender trees seems to be beautiful by nature's thrill. Observing open beauties we hear sweet tune. Wishes and desires have to pass through. We can definitely find long unseen peace. Wisely and perceptually penned poem is shared here.10

A outstanding poem, thanks for sharing,10

Living in hard concrete house My chained mind sometimes Wishes and desires to pass To long there for long unseen peace. excellent philosophical in tone, thanks

A great written, peace seeking through nature, wonderful and romantic as well. It is also a poem fo refreshment, thanks for sharing,10

A day near green and tender trees Colorful and pale wild flowers Naughty monkeys grimacing faces Sweep squirrels picking fruits Cute birds singing tunes,

Observing the open beauties Listening the sweet tones Smelling the wild fragrances Lying on the soft, green grasses Pressing hands on their cool blades Rubbing those hands on own face With pleasure and happiness

Living in hard concrete house My chained mind sometimes Wishes and desires to pass To long there for long unseen peace.