Longing For Freedom Comments

Longing to be free to taste the outside world. Good.

The outside world would seem so unfamiliar now A place where I can be as free as a bird A one is able to fulfill his desires Where the sound of love is always heard wow you seem more then poet and this very much romantic poetic poem shows...you are fantsizing the life and world..well done..poem is rich and very much metaphor type..having visuaized effects..one can feel it.. its truly a good and inspiring poem dear friend...10+++++++++++