Longing For A Cool Breeze Comments
No sun and no air
Just sweltering humidity
Like an unwanted thought
Troubling mind and body
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A Beautiful write on summers discomfort, yes we do long to feel cool breeze especially in the midst of heat and humidity. Loved reading it.
A lovely discriptive write, you can feel the discomfort of he heat as you read along, very good write. Annette
The heat, sweat and discomfort alongwith sleepless night rewarded during summer in a city like Mumbai, located on a sea shore, beautifully portrayed. Thanks for sharing.10 points.
Thank you Ratnakar for your comment. Not from Mumbai but from U.P. I remember those hot and muggy days very well.
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8/16/2025 9:22:52 PM # 1.0.0
Our last summer has been so terrible...... unprecedentedly humid and sweltering......! We felt exactly like this!