Longing Comments

longing a beautiful write and longing for her is great..............

An everlasting longing emerging from the rhyme and rhythm of love.......10.

I totallly loved the flow of this poem...10s

a genuine heart speak of the truth....all have experienced what emotion affect our soul...it did struck my heart....a poem that touches each soul to survive... a very unforgivable feeling of distress of one own life to stand in the limbo of death and life......thank you for sharing this poem, God bless.....a 10 +++

longing is a feeling that endures.here it is amusing too. 'In hours of longing Salt was my eating Sweet was my dreaming My dreams kept falling My longing is undying ' well written voted10 surya

i long for life i long for sleep a long for food to eat. this is what we can expect in this life- the longing. good write a ten

In hours of longing Salt was my eating Sweet was my dreaming My dreams kept falling My longing is undying such a sad theme this is my friend....fine imageries with a clear distinct views and opinion of longing....rhymes all over that made the poem fantastic though not really heartfelt since it's full concentration was in the rhyme ends...Thanks! ! ! Wishing you best! ! ! CT

When you long for something, you have that uneasy feeling of not achieving that. But It's a driver for excellence. A human being comfortable and satisfied has no initiative. good write....

As long as life last, longing last in an ordinary man, saints are exception no longing no pain.........a good write.....

brilliantly written as always! ! ! ! ! ! ! you are amazing when it comes to putting words together! !

Longing is the recourse of life! sweet 'ing' chorous! 10+

We all have longings in life. Though they are only temporal.

you built a cresendo and...last but not the least....but the best In hours of longing Salt was my eating Sweet was my dreaming My dreams kept falling My longing is undying well written cheers

nice portrait, well written poem.......10

I know this feeling sir! ! ... 'In hours of longing Lips were drying Drums were dying Hope was crying Heart kept breaking' and i feel you'v written this one with so much emotion.. Simple but very free flowing write.... Moving one... I honestly don't know wehter longing is a good thing or a bad thing.. But we long for so many things aren't we? ..... nice write. with loves shan