Saturday, May 29, 2010
Longing Comments
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I want to behold your face
On the belly of the horizon
Growing darker and darker
Until it bursts
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Denise Bekker ~* The Sound *~
29 May 2010
Longing for the healer.. A hearts cry. A sense of feeling, wanting to be totally immersed. Well written. Love: D
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7/22/2025 8:27:36 AM # 1.0.0
I like it. It feels more mature than your other two poems. Nicely written and good use of imagery.