Monday, August 11, 2025

Longing Comments

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My gaze fell upon my phone's silent face
A heavy sigh escaped, a longing took its place
To call you, to hear your voice, a deep desire
But reason whispered 'no, ' my heart on fire
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Isadora Quagmire 12 August 2025

Great poem! Excellent rhymes and word scheme! May God bless you dear poetess, may he fill that empty place. Thank you for sharing this : )

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Timber Koleden 11 August 2025

A superb poem when it comes to the wonderful rhyming and to its clear and emotional delivery! May you find peace, poetess.

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