Longing Comments
Poor, lone, Emma.
Old, faded and wrinkled.
Bright eyed beauty once was she,
When the bloom was on the tree.
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Lodigiana so pleased you enjoyed and thank you for your wonderous and most gracious comment. And this is my favourite poem of all of them. And this took a week to write to get the balance of love lost and love eternally found. And the swaying back and fore repetition was to signify time passing and of that final magical reunion that subliminally has been a future heavenly echo running and calling through Emma's life. Take care Lodigiana. Shaun.x.
Oh wow! what a wonderful piece of storytelling filled with all the emotions that surpass the passage of time and as relevant today for those hopelessly in love as it was at anytime. The sad tale just pulls the reader into it's grasp and take us on the journey of eternal love and loss and final reunion! I can understand why this might be a favourite of your Shaun..It is certainly one of mine.Lodigiana xx
Each and every stanza stands out touching the heart of every reader. Beautifully crafted with superb imagery. On to my Poem List.
Thank you Rose Marie for your kind and generous comments and again kudos to you for your recently chosen Poem Of The Day.Well done! ! ! This poem was a tough write to make it so sad and yet uplifting. And I'll share a secret, This poem and Miss Goody Two Shoes and The War In Heaven are my daughters favourites and her name is Rebecca. And I thank you again good Rose Marie. Take care.
What a beautiful story. Spellbinding. One of the best poems I have ever read that vividly portrays longing. It brilliantly depicted the power love. A love so pure and conquers death.
Thank you good Rose Marie for your most kind and generous comment. Forgive this late reply but I'm so glad a world class poetess as your good self enjoyed it. And your poems Rose Marie are the stuff dreams are made of. Take care and all the loved ones around you
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7/27/2025 2:14:50 PM # 1.0.0
Revisiting this one of a kind love story woven by a wonderful and brilliant Poet. A poetic gem that touches the heart. So beautifully crafted with great images.